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Her had feared being stopped by the slavers, attacked and forced to fight.
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You mean "he" right? Not a major typo, but enough to almost confuse me...
I think everything looks good for Shae on your post,
Folwren. I think I'll put in a save, but due the load of schoolwork I'm not sure how soon I can fill it. Friday night would probably be the latest; if that's too long, let me know and I'll remove it.
Folwren, most of my post will most likely be between Shae and Athwen. Let me know if there's anything specific you would like me to add into it.