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Old 12-22-2018, 11:49 PM   #8
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1) Agreed.

2) Agreed

3) I actually do not see the need to move these sections around. I can see wanting to move TE-SL-29 in between TE-SL-03 and 04 to provide an immediate intro to the story, but the section about the MIddle Men uses the terms 'Faithful' and 'King's Men' and describes Ar-Adunakhor and the linguistic conflicts that arose in Numenor, so to place it before we are told of that in the section under TE-SL-01 does not make sense for me. It fits much better at the end where Fin had it originally. I see no real reason to rearrange it.

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