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					Originally Posted by Tar Elenion  Elvish time (partially published)
 Isn't this in NoMe 1 XXI
 
 Essay, written in response to seeing Pauline Baynes's depiction...
 
 Also in NoMe 2 VI, though, I think, in an edited (by CFH) form (as Tolkien was 'wrathful' in some of his commentary, see BoLT 2).
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 I think you're right on both of these, though I don't have NoMe on hand at the moment.  That's the danger of Wikis - updates tend to be inconsistent.