The Barrow-Downs Discussion Forum - View Single Post - Thorongil: The Corsairs of Umbar, by Ancalagon_the_Black, First Posted April 7, 2004

Snowdog · 07-01-2023, 09:47 PM

The Corsairs of Umbar was an interesting read and the way it was broken into scenes was good.
I sort of felt more intricate detail could be woven into many of the sections, but that is just me I think.

07-01-2023, 09:47 PM	#3
Snowdog Emperor of the South Pole Join Date: Dec 2002 Location: The Western Shore of Lake Evendim Posts: 636	The Corsairs of Umbar was an interesting read and the way it was broken into scenes was good. I sort of felt more intricate detail could be woven into many of the sections, but that is just me I think.