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Originally Posted by Huinesoron
Well, it's perfectly singable over what you have in the Progress Report, if that helps.
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That's cause I conveniently skipped the parts that don't quite match up in my head.
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Originally Posted by Hui
As to the rest... well, I don't know! I've sung it a couple of times, and I like the way it builds in strength as Finrod's part goes on. There's nothing that makes me think it needs changing; isn't that pretty much how he sings it? So I'd say pick what you prefer. I've also sung it as verse 2, which also works.
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Sounds good. I think I'm gonna keep it.
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Originally Posted by Hui
Two specific lines that catch me out: I feel like the last chord on 'prophesying' is pitched wrong, though now that I've noticed it's a chord I guess that's their fault. I also think 'death-defying peaks' could do with a slightly longer first note, and a slightly shorter second & third (at the moment it sounds fairly regular, whereas I'm singing 'defying' quite quickly to allow a fractional pause after 'death').
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1. If it's the chord that falls on "sy" - that's cause the melody resolves into it only on "ing". That's how Finrod sings most of his melody, with a slight lag/overhand. But I agree this one is a bit jarring. I will play around with the chord to make it less noticeable.
2. "Death" is an easy fix. Done.
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Originally Posted by Hui
But really, it's good! I might try and record it at lunchtime just for fun. ^_^
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Please do! I would love to hear it!
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Originally Posted by Hui
Leave it unless it bothers you. I always slow songs down when I sing them anyway, so I hadn't even noticed. ^_^
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I am the same, for this piece in particular. I feel more comfortable with this slower pace when I follow the English lyrics.