Samwise, it's good! I remember reading some of it a while ago, but it wasn't as much. I like the elf friend. I'm not that good at giving advice like this, because I've never really done so before! But...um...how about you write about Primrose and Iau on a trip and something happens to someone (either one of them or someone else) and help is givin. I thought it might go along with the theme you have going on there. It's not much help at all, but I hope maybe it helps!
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