Hey, it is good! Well, you said you knew where you wanted to go- maybe you could perhaps type up a sketchy outline? I'd really love to help, but last time I helped my friend I ended up changing her precious plot. >.< So an outline would certinly help little me and my lack of writing talent...
PM me if you'd be so gracious as to give me more details so I could give thee my humble hints without clogging up the poor Barrow-Wight's webspace. If you want to anyway. (Whew, talk about run on sentances.)
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Rock-a-bye Nazgul, on Weathertop, when the Ring calls, the horses will run. And when Sauron calls, the Nazgul will go, and down will come evil, Ringwraiths and all!
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