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Guinevere · 04-26-2012, 03:08 PM

I enjoyed reading this chapter very much, but have nothing to add which Formendacil and Galadriel55 haven't already said.

My favourite line in this chapter is the last sentence of version B:" A small oversight, but it proved fatal. Small oversights often do."

04-26-2012, 03:08 PM	#4
Guinevere Banshee of Camelot Join Date: May 2002 Location: Switzerland Posts: 5,830	I enjoyed reading this chapter very much, but have nothing to add which Formendacil and Galadriel55 haven't already said. My favourite line in this chapter is the last sentence of version B:" A small oversight, but it proved fatal. Small oversights often do." __________________ Yes! "wish-fulfilment dreams" we spin to cheat our timid hearts, and ugly Fact defeat!