I rewrote the post and I think it's much better this way.
Nogrod, let me know if I handled Athanar right. I just figured that as we were in the editing stage, it would be much easier and more reasonable for me to just write it out myself and not try to do a back and forth. Particularly since you'd said it'd be alright with Athanar.
So, we're ready for this next day. Yay!
Firefoot, I am glad to see you around and posting. Does Leof get to ride with us?