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Looks like I somehow got the role to look like the one who always appears and compains, but honestly, that's not my intention at all... I want to be helpful and constructive...
But Eorl, I think in your post for Kara, you should probably not make her to be so... hmm... sentimental. Okay, I am probably one of those who know about Kara the least around here, having never been around when she was still an active character, but that much I know for certain that she was not that desperately in love or anything like that, and apparently not so prone to such a psychic downbreak either. That said, of course she would be shaken from the rather dramatic events - as much as anybody would - and for losing a friend under such circumstances, but not sure if some of her inner thoughts would be in the way you portrayed it.
But anyway, I suggest for now just leaving it open, but waiting for somebody who has been playing with Kath before and eventually they might tell you more as to how to e.g. edit your post for Kara or something to make it fit her character better. But if the general point is of her to spill out the information, there will surely be a way to do it in a way fitting for her character. But others will surely be better judges in that, so just wait when somebody who knows Kara better tells you...
(I am saying this mainly so that if somebody wanted to continue from this post... so that we might sort of keep the question of the exact words of Kara and the continuity open.)
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"Should the story say 'he ate bread,' the dramatic producer can only show 'a piece of bread' according to his taste or fancy, but the hearer of the story will think of bread in general and picture it in some form of his own." -On Fairy-Stories
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