OMG... I don't like what I see. For the closer I read the last post the clearer it is that lord Athanar would have had basically none of it...
But however I try to read it, it's quite clear Athanar would have interrupted at least Lithor coming back to the issue of temporary lordship and especially to his own oath of loyalty. I mean that is the absolutely last line lord Athanar would just listen silently.
I'll PM you some suggestions Groin if we could incorporate some dialogue there... as soon as I can.
It would be sad to keep you others waiting because of this. (With waiting I mean "not knowing the outcome".)
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Upon the hearth the fire is red
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet...
Last edited by Nogrod; 11-25-2009 at 03:51 PM.
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