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I'm sorry if my advice seems harsh -- just remember that reviewers are harsher.
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It's okay. I appriciate it anyway; I knew my character was something of a Sue (litmus tests usually give me "Borderline Sue" when I test this character), and I'm just looking for tips to improve her. Some things I just refuse point-blank to change (her connexions to the Fellowship), but plenty of things are negotiable, so outside opinions are always helpful.
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symestreem, that's a very good definition of MSs. That's the one I tend to go by. If I can't believe the character, I can't believe the story, and so I leave. Thank you for posting that! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
Abedithon le,
~*~Aranel~*~