This story is just too funny. The Mary-Sues I thought of as a little girl are even better than this one.
The story is put together with the words "and then this, and then that, etc."
I just had to burst out lauging because it is so illogical! [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]
I never knew a fifteen year old could write so badly considering i am sixteen! [img]smilies/eek.gif[/img] Just a year older!!!!!!
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