What the Mordor was that supposed to be? I can usually forgive some Mary-Sues if they're written well enough, but that was absolutely horrendous. People, read that, and you know exactly what NOT to do!!!
**Okay, we've spent all this time bashing Mary-Sues. Now, what are your suggestions for fixing them?**
Abedithon le,
~*~Aranel~*~