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Folwren · 01-31-2009, 07:54 AM

Great! That was a wonderful post, Lhuna! This is exciting.

I thought you'd appreciate being told that you twice said 'her daughter' instead of 'his daughter' when talking about Ginna. In the first sentence of the second paragraph, and the last sentence in the third.

Does this mean that you'll be around more often a bit? *hopeful grin*

I won't be able to post for the next two days, but I doubt my characters will be called upon much, unless it were Saeryn.

-- Foley

01-31-2009, 07:54 AM	#1354
Folwren Messenger of Hope Join Date: Jun 2005 Location: In a tiny, insignificant little town in one of the many States. Posts: 5,076	Great! That was a wonderful post, Lhuna! This is exciting. I thought you'd appreciate being told that you twice said 'her daughter' instead of 'his daughter' when talking about Ginna. In the first sentence of the second paragraph, and the last sentence in the third. Does this mean that you'll be around more often a bit? hopeful grin I won't be able to post for the next two days, but I doubt my characters will be called upon much, unless it were Saeryn. -- Foley __________________ A young man who wishes to remain a sound atheist cannot be too careful of his reading. - C.S. Lewis