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Originally Posted by Folwren
Nogrod, I'll fix Cnebba's age. Garmund is 9, right?
You're thoughts concerning Snowstreak is interesting. That can definitely be incorporated.
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Except that they were
my thoughts, actually...
Anyway,
Nog you said:
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Now he's sure Snowstreak has changed after the fire to become so much more easily startled
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Wouldn't just "more easily startled" be okay?
No need to exaggerate things...