[littlemanpoet]

Originally Posted by mark12_30

Adding their "sulkiness" to Tharonwe's "sulkiness" could prove really hellish. Nice touch.

Thanks. I like how it's kind of comical.

Washing away all that ash... Ahh, soo sweet. Bringing spring back again? Hold off, don't do it for a while. BUt it will be wow when it does happen.

Okay, I like that too. And Mithrellas being his guide - well, does he need one, considering how I'm writing him?

Avarien departed too quickly, perhaps. COuld she be lingering Osanwe-wise somewhere near? Hadn't thought of that. Maybe she gets "sent back for a time"-- if she's needed in some way. Gah. Shelving that for the moment.

That Mellonin is mind communicating to Ravion and he back, tells me that Avarien is not really gone.

Build wheels. I'm only partly kiddling. THe essence of who he is should play the strongest part. Maybe some fundamentally Rohirric thing will Matter. Maybe just his original befriending of Amroth/Mellondu. THe snowball fight.

In other words, friendship plain and simple. Okay.

See above. She was a gypsy? Wisdom about drawbacks of the wandering lifestyle?

Okay, but I'm no good at gypsy lifestyle. Drawbacks of wandering? Okay, maybe I could do something with that.

What would Raefindan expect Indil/Angela to do?

That actually doesn't help at all because she's still a mystery to Raefindan; but on second thought that actually helps, because then I at least know that whatever she is going to do is going to be a surprise to everybody. After all, we're dealing with a very unique construct at this point, a little girl who is descended from Mithrellas combined with the soul and spirit of a 21st century young woman who has already experienced both earthly love and paradise, and knows it. (trampling all over Hebrews "only once to live" here, but so did Tolkien I guess).

So I think my next post is probably going to be something more with Tharonwë, which makes it your turn. Anything from Indil/Angela is down the road a bit, just like Raefindan's rain.