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mark12_30 · 04-21-2008, 07:32 PM

OK< I did some skimming. Mostly, lately, thedreams have been about Roy and indil. SO mightn't it be appropriate if the first working backward part --- or maybe even the intro to it-- was more about Mithrellas, Imrazor, INdil, Roy, Angela?

It would set the stage as to why Indil (Angela) was the answer to Avarien's searching. (Which I admit I'm currently a bit fuzzy on, but it's working/worked.) Amroth and Erebemlin can rest up, a little, & Ravion, Mellonin, and Nethwador too, while part of the indil story is told.

Maybe it begins with Tharonwe's resentment, and his need to remain important/ influential desite his sudden loss of interest in Nimrodel? Maybe it's time to flesh out the dark elf and explain his twistedness to the audience?

04-21-2008, 07:32 PM	#705
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	OK< I did some skimming. Mostly, lately, thedreams have been about Roy and indil. SO mightn't it be appropriate if the first working backward part --- or maybe even the intro to it-- was more about Mithrellas, Imrazor, INdil, Roy, Angela? It would set the stage as to why Indil (Angela) was the answer to Avarien's searching. (Which I admit I'm currently a bit fuzzy on, but it's working/worked.) Amroth and Erebemlin can rest up, a little, & Ravion, Mellonin, and Nethwador too, while part of the indil story is told. Maybe it begins with Tharonwe's resentment, and his need to remain important/ influential desite his sudden loss of interest in Nimrodel? Maybe it's time to flesh out the dark elf and explain his twistedness to the audience? __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.