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littlemanpoet · 03-19-2008, 08:51 AM

Change the first part of Raefindan's last sentence to this:

"Though my will, mind and body were used, it was another who sought to kill,..." and then finish it the way you have.

03-19-2008, 08:51 AM	#660
littlemanpoet Itinerant Songster Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: The Edge of Faerie Posts: 7,066	Change the first part of Raefindan's last sentence to this: "Though my will, mind and body were used, it was another who sought to kill,..." and then finish it the way you have.