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Originally Posted by Kath
For which I apologise. I got a little carried away with my narrating and didn't refer back to what Volo had written before except for the names of the vampires and their little quarrel. But hey, it made for some interesting interpretations!
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No, they work very well!

The biggest difference in them was that in your narration there were no spelling mistakes in every second word and the words were much more versatile. I don't think you contradicted any of the stuff I wrote earlier and I very much liked the way you told about Eomer being protected from Eomer's own eyes.