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Very good attempts, especially Rune's. Sauron it could be, except for one problem - he surely was there even "at the start of times".
And the Moon... I wouldn't be so sure if rising at the moment of the coming of Noldor should be considered as taking part in their treachery, as well as if undoing the treachery would have any effect on the Moon...
So, keep trying. Though with some thoughts you were pretty close.
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