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Alrighty. Sorry it took me such ages to get around to writing this tiny bit.
Put this direction after "What duties are you leaving unattended" line. Don't bother with the 'Folwren's post' thing, either. I'd rather just see it added on without interruption.
-- Folwren
“We’re not leaving any duties,” Javan blurted out. “I mean, we were just grooming some horses. We came because we heard someone screaming.” He finally looked away from Lefun and Ritun and his eyes settled on Falco. They were still as round as saucers and nearly as large. Falco’s face wore a look of unveiled annoyance and Javan swallowed, abruptly realizing that he was still staring, even if it wasn’t at the twins. He dropped his gaze and looked at the ground, sending small glances up at the hobbit and then at Lefun and Ritun. “What did she scream for?” he asked.
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