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Old 10-05-2006, 01:43 PM   #554
littlemanpoet
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littlemanpoet is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.littlemanpoet is battling Black Riders on Weathertop.
Hee hee! Funny stuff. But I would appreciate if you could un-comic-book-ize Anakron juuuuust a wee bit:

"You! Dwarf!" Anakron called, turning to the dwarf, "You ignored me. Why?"

Anakron stared at the Dwarf, hardly believing his eyes and ears. "How can you be certain?"

Anakron's teeth clenched and his brow lowered menacingly. "Do you not know who I am?" he grated.

Anakron ignored her.

"Dwarf! Come back here!" he called. Smilog stopped and turned around. Anakron felt suddenly vindicated and said with a note of triumph, "So, you have been ignoring me!" He paused for effect, then in a growl said, "You will pay."

Anakron nodded patiently. "Just answer my question."

"No wonder people assault him with such regularity!" said Anakron.

I um guess that's quite a bit of editing, but well, that would put him more in character.....
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