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The departure seems a bit abrupt to me, still (pondering what I should do to fix it)
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I think it's a little weird that we have no post of the men saying goodbye to the women, but that's just my opinion. Mellondu not saying goodbye to Mellonin? Ędegard and Leafa? Nethwador and Bella? I know it probably happened at some point before the men leaving, but it's just not in there in the form of a post.
Other than that...Where's Nuru?
-Aylwen