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Well, this subplot was Noggie's idea. The first post just fell to me. 
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I wouldn't call it a subplot, but however...
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I'd really like to continue having some friction between the children, if that's okay with Nogrod and Lommy. It does make things more interesting.
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I agree with you and lmp here. And I thought I was not giving any "solutions". Basically my post would just confuse the matters - and depending on the timing, making the things even worse...
Just think: Leothern and Cnebba realising that they have done something wrong (even very superficially) and trying to apologise just to see that Garmud is having this trek of his to the ruins with Falco & others!
- How jealous would they be, and what would they plot against him then!
- How Stigend and Garstan would have hard times to trying to solve the matters?
- And surely Stigend's idea of the adventure of the evening is born dead (I have written it with that in mind) as Garmund has a lot more interesting adventure to have! So it also makes Stigend frustrated: he tries to solve the problem of the kids but others intervene and act quicker on behalf of one of the kids, not looking to the best interest of them all - oh, that moral resentment Stigend would feel towards Falco and Thornden for meddling with the affair without better knowledge of the situation (and his own shame of being late with all of this as the "strangers" got to act first).
I mean anything. Lots of tensions...
So should we write this in away where Stigend is a bit late with his proposal of peace-making and Garmund is already getting off / has already gone with Falco & others? That could make Leothern and Cnebba confused and angry & and make it harder for Stigend (Modtryth) and Garstan to solve (after Garstan has given Garmud a leave to go with the company without knowing that Stigend has talked to Leothern and Cnebba)?
What do you think? I still think my post fits this storyline, but do you accept it?