Davem, Nogrod, and Lalwende, thanks for your replies! It can only make my work better. If I do post it in the fanfic, it might be too long, so I would have to do it chapter by chapter.
Another thing: I do not think that I will try to use the Sindarin language and apply it to my elves. I have already developed rough languages for the orcs, men, dwarves, and halflings, so I plan on going ahead and creating one for the elves.
Also, I think my plot is pretty good. It just needs fine tuning, so I dont come out looking like a Tolkien plagiarist. Dont worry, my story has nothing to do with rings...
I will post with any new news.
Thanks!
P.S. Lalwende, speaking of poetry, there will be plenty in my story. Songs and spoken legends will definitely be present.