No, Tevildo, your post looked fine. The only thing that popped into my head was not something you wrote. Azhar's going on about how this could maybe be their rescuer. Kwell, who's probably tired and ready to rest up for tomorrow's fight, likely won't look up, but may give a sour-
"Maybe you're dreaming. For goodness' sake, can't you do it quietly?" And then be quiet. If you want to add that, you can, if you do not, then don't.
Who exactly do these eyes belong to?
-- Folwren
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