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I do like it but it would be easier for me if you slightly altered the last bit so he asks her the same question while they are riding along. I don't think i can do another flash back post since the group has moved off. I will slightly alter the end of my post to make that clear and I will push her hood back so her miserable face can be seen!!
Is that OK... ?
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“But Finrod walks with Finarfin his father beneath the trees in Eldamar.”
Christopher Tolkien, Requiescat in pace
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