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mark12_30 · 06-13-2006, 06:23 PM

I think Ravion and Aeron are still at last-night, but the rest of them are in The-Morning-After.

I'll look at it some more. I think we could shuffle things around Imladris' post (I hope), moving Aeron & Ravion before or into, and Rohan, Mellondu & Mellonin & Erebemlin, after.

Edit: No, you're right; Ravion "mentions" that everyone else has gone to Mellonin's parents' house. So Ravion & Aeron are stargasing on the evening of the day of the visit.

Hmmm.

Edit 2:

We could apply a band-aid as follows: when Father, mother, Mellondu & Mellonin retreat into the back room, Father asks for a day-- instead of a moment or two. The whole band excuses themselves politely, and some of the conversation and pondering takes place while walking back to the Inn, or later in the day, or... or something like that.

Option number three: find a mod, and ask politely for some juggling.....

06-13-2006, 06:23 PM	#930
mark12_30 Stormdancer of Doom Join Date: Jan 2002 Location: Elvish singing is not a thing to miss, in June under the stars Posts: 4,349	I think Ravion and Aeron are still at last-night, but the rest of them are in The-Morning-After. I'll look at it some more. I think we could shuffle things around Imladris' post (I hope), moving Aeron & Ravion before or into, and Rohan, Mellondu & Mellonin & Erebemlin, after. Edit: No, you're right; Ravion "mentions" that everyone else has gone to Mellonin's parents' house. So Ravion & Aeron are stargasing on the evening of the day of the visit. Hmmm. Edit 2: We could apply a band-aid as follows: when Father, mother, Mellondu & Mellonin retreat into the back room, Father asks for a day-- instead of a moment or two. The whole band excuses themselves politely, and some of the conversation and pondering takes place while walking back to the Inn, or later in the day, or... or something like that. Option number three: find a mod, and ask politely for some juggling..... __________________ ...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve. Last edited by mark12_30; 06-13-2006 at 06:49 PM.