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Originally Posted by Arry
Tevildo
Your plan sounds fine. But I don't think Brand will be falling out off his horse.
So - Sythric? or Vaenosa, it will have to be.
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If you see the plan fit, then Sythric might be the one to drop. He was after all the most severely wounded. I'll post Sythric talking with Brand in a moment (as I just write it down), and will end it with him feeling quite bad.
If you will take on the option Tevildo suggested, feel free to depict Sythric falling from his horse and do what you will... Sythric is totally usable (for your writing) at that point. If you will not stick to this plan, then it just could be understandable, that he felt bad for a moment, and then continued.
If Arry wants Brand to comment on Sythric's discussion, that should of course be made first - and because of that possibility, I'll make his bad feeling written cautiously, so as to allow multiple ways to go on...