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Just a couple of remarks:
Tevildo: I have made Leod kind of a "yes-man", as I supposed, that he would be agreeing, and I didn't want to put too many words in his mouth. If you think, this is "un-Leodish", let me know: we can put some reactions to him in my post. And if you disagree in some more general sense, then let me know too. I will change the post according you ideas. I just thought it good to rtry and get things going...
Eowyn: Feel free to answer Sythric's proposal, and possibly to depict Sythric going towards the thing that he will then be doing (according to your choice).
Undómė: You write that there was a trio working with the oat cakes (and "the three worked") - aren't there four of you: Meghan, Raedwald, Brand & Incana?
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Upon the hearth the fire is red
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet...
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