I hope I have not made Fion too ill. I have tried to leave things hanging in the balance so it could go either way once the journey starts. But if you'd like me to edit, I certainly will.
Also, Athwen, Dorran has akwardly tried to make amends for this rudeness. You know how young lads are!
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Now Tevildo was a mighty cat--the mightiest of all--and possessed of an evil spirit,...and he was in Melko's constant following; and that cat had all cats subject to him, and he and his subjects were the chasers and getters of meat for Melko's table.
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