Well Farael my friend. You are really flying with this one...
Great!
But still, I would advice, that we think about the organizing of this one first (as you seem to do, quite well, indeed), and then make a small - and I mean small (5 pages, or so) - part of the story to see how it works. Lots of dialogue, some narration...
The actual trying will show us many shortcomings in our planning, and help us build a better infrastructure to it. To see in which formats we actually can be handling the stuff etc.
Happy to be of help, if I can!
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Upon the hearth the fire is red
Beneath the roof there is a bed;
But not yet weary are our feet...
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