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Re: Feedback please! Fan-fiction...
Mith, I've really got to hand it to you. That was superb writing. Certainly among the very best of the downs's fan-fiction so far, and always will be. I really enjoyed reading that.
(BTW, If I may give a tip for your further installments, don't make them so long. I suppose the introduction is fine when it's long, but subsequent installments and chapters should be less than 750 words. Otherwise I am sure that these traitorous barrow-wights we have will not read the whole thing, and it also gives a sense of 'reeling 'em in'. Eh? What do you say)
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