Sounds great,
Nerindel! I'm glad we are all on the same page here. Sorry if I threw you somewhere. I thought I was being fairly clear.
I am thinking, though, that maybe you should post again before I try to do anything with Naiore. Right now, Menecin has got Naiore in a hold with his dagger against her side. Vanwe has already escaped to Lespheria's side.
The outline says:
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8. Vanwe slips from her mother's grasp into the arms of Léspheria & Vanwe's show of pity and compassion stops her father from delivering the deadly blow.
10. Desperate and filled with rage, Naiore turns on Léspheria.
11. Lespheria speaks to Naiore pointing out all that she has lost in pursuit of an answer that was within her to begin with, She then turns her back on Naiore.
12. Naiore incensed and blaming Léspheria for Vanwe's pity strikes out at Léspheria.
13. Naiore is killed!
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Either I can have Naiore get herself out of this or you need to have Vanwe act here. If I am going to stick with the outline, I really don't have much else I can do until your characters take further action.