Thanks, Pio. I'd like to change the last sentence only, really, from
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Having known from years ago the elf given command of the contingent, Gilduin asked to join, and was assigned as standard-bearer.
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Eldegon, the commander of the contingent, had known Gilduin from years ago and asked him to join the company. Gilduin agreed and was assigned as standard bearer.
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Thanks again.
