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What lmp said! Aylwen, your song's just right-- emotionally strained, hungry, contradictory... Deep down Mellondu suspects what it means, but he can't face it.
lmp, let's just get to the city. The elves know that Mellondu is ready to just go home... and Tharonwe would like that just fine, would he not? Erebemlin and Taitheneb can shut their minds tight. Erebemlin knows that he won't leave Mellondu's side; Taitheneb guesses his decision; but nobody else knows that. So it will be a bit of a surprise when a very tall, very large, very blond elf follows Mellondu right into his parents's little modest apartment and, Sam-like, refuses to budge from Mellondu's side.
Taitheneb can ride herd on Tharonwe til the Mellondu-and-his-Dad-concerning-Erebemlin-and-Amroth scene plays out. I guess some of the others can visit the Inn, or something.
What think ye, folks?
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.
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