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Amroth's dream
Hey lmp,
It seems to me that Amroth's dream (just posted) belongs before breakfast... But it needs the snow. And Ędegard's introduction is so perfect. But I still think the dream needs to be before breakfast. (Although after the snowy gravediggging would be a nice touch, if Mellondu was still asleep.) Any ideas? Could Ędegard maybe come back in, see that many still sleep, and then the dream, and then breakfast...?
--help
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