Crystal,
Just want to say that your story is off to a good start! Good posting, folks....
Also, I've sent you a pm touching on something Starkat alluded to: the shift forward to the next "scene" where the good guys arrive at the estate. You'll want to take a look at the general schedule you developed with the proposal and make sure that you're staying on track.
Looking forward to seeing how this all plays out.
Cami Goodchild, game mod
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