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Old 07-23-2004, 08:07 PM   #442
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Tolkien overdoses of phrench and latinate...

In the following text, there are four words that are not likley to appear in Tolkien:

"disputes, injuries and lack of focus I see that you have much to contend with."

disputes: war of words.... quarrel

injuries: wounds ... hurt ... cut ... gash ... scratch ... tear .. blemish

focus: heedfulness ... regard .... care ... notice .... give mind to .... hearken to ...

just some ideas for you. Hope that helps.
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