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Originally Posted by Amanaduial the archer
I have editted my post from the save - Kransha, is this in line with what you wanted?  |
Precisely. I really love the part at the end, the last paragraph. The tension is growing, amongst both the sides of light and dark (I'm not good at melodrama, can you tell?). Speaking of tension, and the eve of battle, in which that will all come to its crux, when is that? I mean the 'battle.' I assume, as soon as the little mini-epic of the escape/release of the Elvish prisoners is over, there will be a number of days in which
more tension grows (and trolls become problematic, apparemtly), but about how many 'real-world' days might there be? I'm sure there is no exact date, and I could make assumptions...but...Let's just say I'm very eager for my villain to get his just desserts...