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*claps* Very good, post, Orofaniel. Nothing needs changing, as Thrakmazh was used well, and in-character. Only one thing, but you don't need to change it, since I am simply a man who loves to nitpick. Thrakmazh is one-eyed, so he doesn't have 'eyes' per se. But, this is really irrelevant, since no one would notice on first glance. Again, good post, and a good discourse between all the captains.
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Thank your for such kind words.
About the eye - I think I'll change it, if it's alright with you. I must admit that even though I read through your character profile (and Aman's) while writing it, it must have slipped my mind.
Cheers,
Oro
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"Captain Herding's way of thinking is..." he hesitated, trying to formulate the right words, before giving up. "Frankly, the man reminds me all too strongly of a pair of the most despicable human beings I have ever come into contact with."
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Oooo. o.0 - Very nice. I like it.
EDIT II: Your Orc has one eye now Kransha. =)
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