Perky, not to appear petty or anything, but Cerímb's actually the mother of Eldín  .
Otherwise, it's all looking really good. I'll try to get in a post as soon as possible.
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Herein, it is said, the power of Ulmo was shown. For he gathered tidings of all that passed in Beleriand, and every stream that flowed from Middle-earth to the Great Sea was to him a messenger, both to and fro
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