looks good to me
Imladris , I have even put up a reply.
I have been waiting patiently for one of the bad guys to post!
I have also wrote a post for the roquen that were under Astalders command and edited it to post #49 it should explain how Adenain and his men know of Astalder's catpture, when he was clearly not with them.
Orual let me know if anything need's changed.