Eowyn,
looks good. The whole being raised in Imladris thing caught my attention, but i think it can work. You show good writing style. I personally liked the twitching trees. Nothing better than tree spasms  welcome to the last ride!
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'But Melkor also was there, and he came to the house of Fëanor, and there he slew Finwë King of the Noldor before his doors, and spilled the first blood in the Blessed Realm; for Finwë alone had not fled from the horror of the Dark.'
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