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alaklondewen · 04-05-2004, 08:32 PM

Sorry, I wanted to post this afternoon, but real life sometimes has a mind of its own. I will definitely put Marcho's post up tomorrow.

Witch_Queen and Arestevana, what if Marcho sees the women running by and physically stops them and demands they go back to their wagons. Then the women might join forces and follow the men anyway. Anyway, that would let the reader in on what exactly the women are doing without three separate posts about the same thing. If you want to come in afterward (I understand it might be a problem for Witch_Queen), you could tell of the women working their way toward the front of the part (similar to Eowyn?). What do you think?

04-05-2004, 08:32 PM	#258
alaklondewen Song of Seregon Join Date: Feb 2002 Location: Following the road less traveled Posts: 1,193	Sorry, I wanted to post this afternoon, but real life sometimes has a mind of its own. I will definitely put Marcho's post up tomorrow. Witch_Queen and Arestevana, what if Marcho sees the women running by and physically stops them and demands they go back to their wagons. Then the women might join forces and follow the men anyway. Anyway, that would let the reader in on what exactly the women are doing without three separate posts about the same thing. If you want to come in afterward (I understand it might be a problem for Witch_Queen), you could tell of the women working their way toward the front of the part (similar to Eowyn?). What do you think? __________________ At last I understand why we have waited! This is the ending. Now not day only shall be beloved, but night too shall be beautiful and blessed and all its fear pass away!