*Eol accepts drink gladly!*
Well how about a ten page *graphic* love scene( graphic as in porn graphic)? Mind you this is not a romance novel. This is a story about people traveling. The above mentioned scene terribly disrupted the flow of the story. This happened not just once, but multiple times! Forgive me as the book and its author has escaped me.
You can use whatever you want, but be kind!
[ August 29, 2002: Message edited by: Eol ]
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