The starting point could be either one, really, with out changing the story too much. Is it possible to have two starting points? Like have the first post cut between two points of view?
As far as charchters go, I don't have much to say on the baddies, but the Envoy should have an ambassador (or two), two guards, and a membor of the honorary escort (agian- maybe two.) The Mirk wood party should have at least two points of view, it not more, and they would of course all be scouts.
Arvedui III, do you mean Antonio Banderaz? Any way it's a bad movie, but the music was good. All Mariachi band stuff.
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