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Rose Cotton · 04-20-2002, 08:39 AM

I hope you don't mind.

Since most of us are writers here I was wondering if you could take a look at my story plot and tell me what you think.
PLEASE DON'T TAKE ANY OF MY IDEAS

There's another world.
It has no humans. Just animals and plants.
On the planet is an island called Palania.(I got that off the name generator. Can't remember what it means though. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] )
The island is made up of a huge volcano. In the volcano live evil shadow creatures called nefchil (somtimes when I'm writing my story I accedently call them nazgul). When they've multiplied enough they set out to attack the planet. Every time this happens almost everything is destroyed.
So one day someone (God?) sent angels to protect the earth. Each angel had a certain speacies of animal to look after. And they have the power to change into whatever animal they have to protect.

Thousands of years go by with the angels battleing the nefchil and keeping a balence of good and evil.
Till one day everything goes wrong.
For some strange reason many of the animals start acting strange. Attacking eachother, and going crazy, and finally dying.
They find out what is wrong. (I can't tell you it's a secret)
In order to stop the cause they must find the sorce.
Their journey takes them into the depts of the earth to dark caverns and places of hell. They find civilizations of dragons and huge monsters.

There is alot of drama and loss in this story but a good supply of humer too.

It's not the most complicated story but it should be pritty good. If you would like to see the first few chapters:
1)go to fanfiction.net
2)type The Protectors into title search at the top of the page
3)scroll down till you come to The Protectors story by Rose Cotton

[img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] thank you for reading this post. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

04-20-2002, 08:39 AM	#18
Rose Cotton Ghost Prince of Cardolan Join Date: Dec 2001 Location: A place worse then Mordor........School! Posts: 1,075	I hope you don't mind. Since most of us are writers here I was wondering if you could take a look at my story plot and tell me what you think. PLEASE DON'T TAKE ANY OF MY IDEAS There's another world. It has no humans. Just animals and plants. On the planet is an island called Palania.(I got that off the name generator. Can't remember what it means though. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] ) The island is made up of a huge volcano. In the volcano live evil shadow creatures called nefchil (somtimes when I'm writing my story I accedently call them nazgul). When they've multiplied enough they set out to attack the planet. Every time this happens almost everything is destroyed. So one day someone (God?) sent angels to protect the earth. Each angel had a certain speacies of animal to look after. And they have the power to change into whatever animal they have to protect. Thousands of years go by with the angels battleing the nefchil and keeping a balence of good and evil. Till one day everything goes wrong. For some strange reason many of the animals start acting strange. Attacking eachother, and going crazy, and finally dying. They find out what is wrong. (I can't tell you it's a secret) In order to stop the cause they must find the sorce. Their journey takes them into the depts of the earth to dark caverns and places of hell. They find civilizations of dragons and huge monsters. There is alot of drama and loss in this story but a good supply of humer too. It's not the most complicated story but it should be pritty good. If you would like to see the first few chapters: 1)go to fanfiction.net 2)type The Protectors into title search at the top of the page 3)scroll down till you come to The Protectors story by Rose Cotton [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] thank you for reading this post. [img]smilies/biggrin.gif[/img] __________________ "There's nothing you can do, Harry... nothing... he's gone."-Remus Lupin "The closer we are to danger, the further we are from harm."-Pippin (now how can you argue with that logic?)