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a longer fistfight
Imladris,
One way to edit the fistfight and make it longer might be for Saraphim and I to each write another round of boxing, and then put it here; and then Saraphim can paste it into her post; you could add a section too, from Balin's point of view; and then the firght can end the way it already has, with somebody pinning Narin's arms to his sides.
It means that Saraphim's post gets quite long; but it works as a way to add some more zest to the fight.
How about it, Narin? (Lîn's fists come up again.)
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...down to the water to see the elves dance and sing upon the midsummer's eve.
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